Monday, September 21, 2009

NEXT TIME...





The heart wrinkles, and dream twinkles;
When heart brims, my soul shrinks;
Open the door, let me in;
The love if true, is never a sin;
World may laugh, world may LOL;
Nothing but you matters at all;
Words too common, not words too lame;
The three if i say, then please don't blame...

I look in your eyes, you know that i love;
You do care about me, matters all above;
The words unflown, the unquenched thirst;
I fear the secret may tear, twist or burst;
U realize y i don't say, the pain of my heart;
Ki keh na saka tumse main wo chhoti si baat...

You stopped me from writing you,
I stopped self from meeting you;
If you hear me my dear angel,
Let me say my heart is true;
If you know the "you" is YOU, do me a favor;
No need to write anything with keyboard, cell or paper;
Stop my pinching pain with a simple yes or no...
NEXT TIME I SEE YOU, JUST TURN BACK AND GO...

2 comments:

jatin said...

I hav written what exactly came to my mind
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NIICE!!!! u r good dude... real nice... sleek i would say .. or rather cheeky.. good rhyming stuff.. im not poet or something but i can say this is GOOD .. kab likha .. must have lot of time for the poem.. real NICE .....
ek doubt hai but i wait for your reply .. nice tree in the background ./. nice pic .. umm y wearing half the jacket ..? lookng intense uhh ; NICE !!! thodi handwriting sudhaar le .. the recyled heart is good but the text aint .. dont mind u can use a TEXT BOX when editing the picture in paint i suppose... REAL NCE.. btw whts CHOCOLOVEY?? anyways neat :O NICE!! thts the word ... NICE

Gurmeet Singh said...

wow... amazed by ur comment!! thanx for much appreciation :)
i like sleek blogs...i mean who has time to read looong entries of sum1 else's life unless he's paid for that ;)
i have loads of time for myself and doing wat pleases me...thats alwez my first priority...kab likha? ho gaye do hafte shayad...
KYA DOUBT HAI??? now that i have replied u can go ahead wid ur doubt....
half jacket because i felt like wearing it that way...like now-a-days i feel like wearing 3/4ths and slippers :D
i know i can use a text box in paint and what not...but i didn't wish to tear twist or turn the originality of the pic (taken from google...its still virgin....i mean no paint used on it)
chocolovey bcz when i made this blog i ws crazy about chocolates and i believe choco is liked by most pepl of our age group so chances of liking the blog increase ;)

thanks again for all the NICE words :)
all a poet needs is appreciation ;)
w8ing for ur doubt...

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